How to write
a play: The Nguyen method
Don Nguyen - Written for PerformanceOmaha.com
When it comes
to the theatre, the play is the thing. Local actor, director and
playwright, Don Nguyen of the Shelterbelt Theatre offers some advice
on how to get started.
HOW I GOT
STARTED
I officially started playwrighting in college. In my beginning playwriting
class, I started off writing mostly short comic pieces. They were
fun and funny for the most part. Then we had to write a one-act
play for our final project. I changed gears and adapted a bunch
of stories that my father had told me of our family, growing up
and eventually escaping from Vietnam. It was with this piece that
my professor said I had truly found my voice. It didn't really make
sense to me until years later when I got to work with other playwrights
at the Shelterbelt Theatre. Giving them feedback on their plays
really made me understand the importance of finding one's voice
in playwrighting, or in all of writing for that matter. Your voice
can come quickly or slowly. The only way to find it is to write.
HOW TO COME
UP WITH IDEAS
Your mind is a powerful source of untapped ideas. The more you write,
the more you drill into your head, and, at some point, just like
tapping an underground oil well, your ideas will start springing
out. Memories in your life will become an important source for ideas.
Go out and experience life as much as possible. Watch movies, read
books, and definitely go to plays. It is your job as a writer to
take all those ideas and organize them, preferably, write them down
somewhere and store them for later use.
THE ART OF
CRAFTING YOUR PLAY
Samuel Johnson wrote, "What is written without effort is in
general, read without pleasure." This is very true. Writing
is hard. You must be willing to put the time and effort into it,
so that when you present your play to the audience, they will know
and appreciate it. Audiences are smart, and they can detect sloppy
work.
A typical dramatic
play follows a two-act structure. Not all plays follow this, however,
if you're starting out as a writer, I suggest you follow the basic
rules. Remember, you have to master the rules before you learn to
break them. Your play should have a protagonist and an antagonist.
Simply put: the good guy and the bad guy or something (or someone)
resembling both. Usually your main character is the protagonist.
In the story, the protagonist needs to accomplish something. Where
does this need come from? It comes from an inciting incident. This
is an event that occurs early in your story that takes your protagonist
from his mediocre, boring world to one that is rich in conflict.
Conflict is the heart of all great stories. Conflict is drama. Without
it your story is boring. Where does the conflict come from? Your
protagonist, in his quest to reach his goal, will come upon many
obstacles along the way. The obstacles are provided by the antagonist
of your story. This creates conflict, which creates drama.
Take The Wizard
of Oz, for example. (Ok, so it's not a play, but almost everyone
knows the story). The protagonist is Dorothy. The inciting incident
is Dorothy rescuing Toto and getting stuck in the house as a tornado
takes her away to the land of Oz. Dorothy's objective or goal becomes
clear: To get back home. Along the way she is greeted by friend
and foe: The Scarecrow, the Tin Man and the Cowardly Lion. All of
these are friends, of course. Her obstacles come from the Wicked
Witch, who sends the group through the dark forest and drugs them
with poppies. After that, she sends forth a bunch of flying monkeys.
All of these are obstacles. As you know, in the end, everything
is resolved. Films and novels are generally plot heavy, whereas
plays are character heavy or character-centric, I should say. In
a two-act play, you still have your basics: the protagonist, the
antagonist, the inciting incident, the objectives and obstacles
of the protagonist and the antagonist.
WHAT TO DO
WHEN YOU'RE DONE WITH YOUR PLAY
So you've made the journey, and you've finished your first draft.
What do you do now? Simple. Rewrite. Yes, rewrite your script. No
one writes a perfect script the first time around. William Faulkner
said, "Kill your darlings" This means you must be objective.
Start with all the things you think are wonderful and great in your
play. Really examine it and ask yourself, "Does it really serve
the story?" If there is doubt, throw it out. After you've rewritten,
it's a good idea to have a public reading. This is where a public
audience is invited to sit and listen as your play is being read
out loud. You can either organize this yourself or find a theatre
that is willing to do it for you. Check out different theatres and
find out if they take submissions. If so, find out their guidelines
and stick to it. Give them only what they ask for. No more, no less.
There's so much
that goes into writing a play; this article is just the tip of the
iceberg. Remember, if you're not writing, then you're not a writer.
And also remember, no one asked you to be a writer. You chose to
be one. So for god's sake, make it interesting for us, the audience.
Here are some
recommended books that I think are helpful to all writers.
- The Art of
Dramatic Writing by Lajos Egri
- The Writer's
Journey by Christopher Vogler
- The Dramatist's
Toolkit by Jeffrey Sweet
- Story: Substance,
Structure, Style and the Principles of Screenwriting by Robert
McKee
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